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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 11 November 2021

The magic boy that moved out of town.

 


Once upon a time there lived a boy named Joe who was a wizard. He lives in a town called Ozil. It was a very two-sided town. You were either very rich or very poor. There was a family of two, mum and son, and their names were Joe and Rose. They were very poor. They never had much money. 

 In the last few weeks we have been learning to write Narratives here is my work:

One day something came smashing through the walls. It was a horse. On top of the horse there was one of the king's shining armor fighters. He says, ‘how dare your walls stop me and my horse from galping out of town. Into the forest all you pests kiss my horse shoes in apology of fine”. Joe darts to think why we do not move out of town. 


After the horse leaves form their house Rose starts to break down and cry. Why oh why did I move here instead of ozih town ship there we would have lived a long happy life. Here it is so sad. Joe thinks hey mum we should move out of this dump with grandma is my say but oh will we get out the king hate people leaving and kill every bould ho tried I have an idea.


At midnight I will open the door to the kind demi rose thoughts run through her head how is my son going to do that it seems almost impossible she slowly asks her son how are you going to pull it off you see mum I am wizard put the king most not find out about it no son no son I am going to tall the king right now no mother if he finds out no! Go to your room and wait for me to get back. Joe thinks I can not give me away. This is a hard thing to do but my mum must not know. 


The Invasion Has Started!

 In the last few weeks we have been learning to write Narratives here is my work:

The invasion had begun. Faced with row upon row of white-clad storm troopers, the Jedis knew they had to act quickly…


Hey jumped up ready to defend there world but there base was falling apart all of there electrical systems were down it was running on very dodgy power every to seconds something would go wrong with the power they prepped there last running vehicle the outlander that would easily be abila to absolutely be able to annihilate the Troopers but It had no…  


GAS! This made every Jedi in the room scared for there's lives but they had one choice and one choice only left. It was an old two calendar. The only good thing about it was that it had 32 tracking missiles but they had no missiles.  One of the jedi jumped in and hit the key. It barely started, one more jti woke up and helped to put the truck into gear but then…


Crash oh no said the other jetis the truck its running away the bas cramped to the ground sadly kill them all the begin shooting at the old truck put multiple holes in it even one in the fuel tank one the jetis looked back and sees fuel leaking out of the side of the truck and thinks that's it the other jeti that that it jeti one say we can siphon siphon what.




Gas out of this old thing and into the gas tank of the new tank let get back quick this gas is leaking oh no they run her in 6 gear with bullets flying through the window I don't know if we are going to make it back to the base then boom they drive on top of the collapsed concrete to be continued  


little read riding hood

 In the last few weeks we have been learning to write Narratives here is my work:


Once Upon a time there lived a girl named Little Red Riding hood. One day her mother said to her that she had to deliver some cookies to her sick grandmother. They were chocolate chips. Her mum tells her that she must not eat any on the way. She says fine  and starts on her journey into the forest.


As she makes her first steps in she meets the wood cutter. He says, “hey little red riding hood be careful a wolf stole one of my axes this morning. I saw it running into the deep dark forest.”  Little red riding hood replies with a giggle, “I will.” She starts walking into the forest again.  


She comes to a cross road when Larry the bear says a wolf stole my money from my house. Little red riding hood says, “I am very sorry about that. I can not help that I have to get these cookies to my grandmother otherwise I would help. Wait, did he have an axe?” “No but there was home when I came back there was one thanks said little red riding hood stat to get worried but got thought it.



As little red riding hood's worry peck she comes out of the wood forest on to the canyon a old voice says I know your all alone little red riding hood     

Eye begins to wonder in her head began to think is this the end she starts to cry she slowly turn around oh it's just you the wood cut is running now and thunder rolls in blood start to drip from the trees canopy then sandly the wolf push him down the canyon then lighting hits and there a wolf standing there with a axe covered in fox blood I have been looking for you say the wolf.


The wolf slowly starts to wake towards the little red riding hood and she starts to run backward. “you won't be going very far, she turns around and starts going even faster. She

Thursday, 1 July 2021

miss C retirement

In Week 8, Term 2  our school librarian, Mrs C, retired. On her last day, we put on a  Book Character Parade. We dressed up in costumes like book characters and then we went making a book of go bye letter here is my page.






 

The old play ground

 

In Week 7,  we went outside and looked at the old wooden playground  to see if we could think how to write about it using personification. We tried to think about the old playground as if it were an old person. We wondered what the old playground might look like or do that was like an old person. Here is my work:



The flying fox grins as it went side to side.


The wood is all old and wrinkled all over and is all rote.


There is very slippery dirt all over the playground.


It retired to playing it now


The playground stands profoundly but it wishes it had its youth back.


On its last legs it is starting to break down into the ground. Its ti

Friday, 28 May 2021

Comic strips

 In Term 2 Week Four we did Play Make Create. This is where the teacher reads you a story and you discuss the message in the story. Then you create something based on the message and also do a piece of writing. You can use materials or make a digital creation.  This week Mrs Craig Read the book paper, Scissors, Rock. It was about friendship and learning about your strengths and weaknesses.  I chose to make comic strip about little girl or boys imagination or was it?


Friday, 21 May 2021

I didn't poem

 This week we have been doing a I didn't poem. Here is my work


Seeds

 This week we have been doing seed writing here is my descriptive writing.


 


Seeds are little things that help a plant grow and populate. This seed has a coal black color and is 
shaped like a triangle or tooth. It is very hard like a brick and comes from old flax and smells like old plants. This seeds is brown and round like a wheel. They are very small and are very soft like a marshmallow.

 This seed comes for quinces and smells like fruit. A seed from a pumpkin is very long compared to the last two seeds and the color is like baby teeth. It is also as thin as paper and looks like a surfboard and smells like a pumpkin.


 This next seed is very worm-like. They are micro compared to the other three seeds and are like white worms. They come from the tip of a pine cone and they smell like tree sap.

Monday, 17 May 2021

Environmental Writing Feathers

 This week we have been learning about feathers and all the different places they can be from. You can have warming feathers, flying feathers and lots more. Here is some of my work.


This Feather is off a duck. It has a lot of different pieces and it's held together by a bunch of very thin wrap. It is very smooth to the touch and to the eye. It is very easy to tickle yourself with it. Smells like a duck. Makes a very slit ravaging sound when you rub it up against your ear. It is gray on the left side and black colour on the right, on the right angle it's white on the tip. It looks very straight and tidy on the wing. The feather has a little paper white stick in the middle and gets smaller as it goes up and gets to a point.


 


 


Thursday, 1 April 2021

Cicada research

 This week we have been doing some research on cicadas here is my work.

Wednesday, 24 March 2021

Treaty of Waitangi

 Over the last three weeks we have been learning about the Treaty of Waitangi.  Here is a drawing of what I learned.


Thursday, 11 March 2021

Description writing

 Over the last week we have been learn to make description writing.


Wednesday, 14 October 2020

We have been learning how to use adjectives to describe a mood and atmosphere. Here is a picture of our tree house that  my group made and the adjectives describe the mood can you guess the mood and atmosphere.


Monday, 7 September 2020

On the bus to Mt Ruapehu


 Here I am in a bus on our ski trip. We watched moves and played games. all the way down to National Park.

Thursday, 18 June 2020

The Rocket Launch

This week I have made this cool story, it’s about a rocket. What do you think?

The Rocket Launch

“Okay, let's do this. I've got 24 hours. Let’s start. Back in 1994 my rocket was going to launch off Apollo 13. So let me share my story. It was May 13 I was having my cup of green tea. Thinking about the launch. I was an astronaut for NASA. I was going on a trip of a lifetime to space. Thinking that if this went smoothly it will make the world proud so I walked to my car.

I drove to the NASA Base. There two engineers put space suits on. As I was starting to regret this trip. It said 2 hours till lift off. We went down an elevator and through a hallway and to the launch pad. There she is Apollo 13”.we got into the cab we ready I said to myself exactly. “Control command ready when you are” 54321...

WHOOSH! BANG! BOOM! “The engines are go” shouted an astronaut from mission control. Shshshsh! I started to soar into the air. “We are at 2200 metres” I said to myself. Booooooom! “Noo the engines are overheating." I said in a scared voice. “Mission control we are noo...” the radio cut out. I began to panic. “Hello are you okay?”  Mission control said at their end, but of course I couldn't hear. Then, engine one went off, followed by engine two, one was left, engine three... I tried to restart it but all it did is drop rocket fuel into the atmosphere. At this stage we were two km to the moon and engine three had gone off.

Space station “I think that he is stuck in space no one knows where he is.” Hello mission control we a-r-e alive oh you are okay he eng-ings are down okay we will tell you what to do. Ok press the rest an then start” Boom Bang “we have landed. I walk out of the rocket and put a flag into the the rock hard grand the end.

Matariki uplits

This week I made cool matake uplits. A couplet is a poem that is the last word on the first line. Has to rhyme theth the second line of the last I have two.




 Matariki writing
 They look in the sky up there there are 6 stars. Who are they so shining they are like new gold bars.


 Himm look there are shooting stars. But it’s still as rock as it is so far it’s in mars.

Friday, 1 November 2019

Great's and Grand's day 2019

Last Friday we had our Great's and Grand's day. My Nana and Grand dad came along. we did performances and dancing. we had a delicious morning Tea and played Games.


Here is my poem I wrote for my grandparent

Friday, 16 August 2019

Balloon Hovercraft



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Balloon Hovercraft
QUESTION

How does a hovercraft hover? air
HYPOTHESIS

I predict that ...it will work, the balloon will hover across the table.


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1 CD 1 balloon 1 Bottle Lid 
PROCEDURE:
Step 1:Using a hot glue gun, Glue the bottle cap over the CD hole. 
Step 2: Bowl up the Balloon.When is fully inflated Twist end so no air comes out. 
Step 3: Stretch The balloon over the end of the bottle cap. 
Step 4:Open up the cup and placed the CD on the surface 
Step 5:Un-Twist the balloon and let it go 
OBSERVATIONS/RESULTS:
It hovered about 1 centimetre above the ground and lots of people called it a lawnmower. It darted around the table.


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The air from the balloon creates a cushion of moving air between the disc and the surface.  The air reduces the friction across the surface 


Friday, 9 August 2019

Speeches

Did you know that machinery can be very, very  dangerous for us humans and animals. Machinery is what you drive in everyday and it has an engine that will run on petrol or diesel. What you drive to school in everyday is a machine. People have been run over before by machines. That's why we have to have safety around these dangerous Physical Machines that are used in Forestry to Tear down Trees.

Firstly, if you stand behind a car it could come back and hurt you very badly, you could end up in hospital. You could even die to the simple mistake. That is why you  Gotta think Before you act. It Just might give you a second chance at life. Thousands of people a year get killed in car crashes and that is a machine.  Forestry workers have been run over by the forestry equipment. Like heavy duty logging trucks and machines that pick up the logs and saw them down.

Secondly people wear orange things that glow in the lights of cars. It is for safety, so at night they don't get hit while working at the site.

Finally, did you know that people can only move houses through towns at night time? So it is very important to think about safety for the House Movers.

Safety is about keeping yourself good and safe from dangerous equipment. We can keep ourselves safe if we don't take risks. Don't listen to people that want you to do dangerous things. Stay safe around large machinery!

Friday, 24 May 2019

Space writing

This week we have been writing about space. Here is a piece of my writing.