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Thursday, 1 July 2021

The old play ground

 

In Week 7,  we went outside and looked at the old wooden playground  to see if we could think how to write about it using personification. We tried to think about the old playground as if it were an old person. We wondered what the old playground might look like or do that was like an old person. Here is my work:



The flying fox grins as it went side to side.


The wood is all old and wrinkled all over and is all rote.


There is very slippery dirt all over the playground.


It retired to playing it now


The playground stands profoundly but it wishes it had its youth back.


On its last legs it is starting to break down into the ground. Its ti

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